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14 July 2005 @ 10:08 pm
My end of the bargain.  
Okay, here's my end of the bargain. :D

THANKSFORYOURFIC. <3<3<3<3


Words
A Twisted Fantasy Drabble.
A Sora/Luna/Astral pairing.
For psychedelic_aya.


“Here, take this.”

Pause.

“What is it?”

Smile.

“Oh, just something I made.”

“Can I open it now?”

Wider smile.

“Of course!”

Ruffles.

“How is it, do you like it?”

Anticipation.

“Yes, it’s very appropriate.”

Chuckles.

“‘Appropriate?’ Is that all you can say?”

Pause.

“I don’t know, the word seemed most… appropriate.”

Silence.

Laughter.

“What’s so funny?”

Confusion.

“Nothing, I’m sorry.”

“Okay.”

Smile.

“How did I do?”

“Huh?”

“I wasn’t too annoying, was I?”

Small smile.

“No, you were really natural.”

Grateful smile.

“You’re very sweet.”

Uncomfortable pause.

“…I think you did great.”

“You really mean that?”

“Yup.”

Innocent smile.

“You think the gift is okay? Is it… ‘appropriate’ enough?”

Laughter from both.

“Yeah. You did well, I’m sure you’ll do better.”

Big grateful smile.

“Thanks a lot, Sora. You were real helpful with this.”

Sad smile. Those were kind words but he knew what to expect next.

“I really hope Astral likes my gift.”



My very first drabble. (According to Aya.) Hahah.... What is a "drabble" anyways? I shall never understand a FanFiction author's vocabulary....

Mood: creative
 
 
 
frio69 on July 14th, 2005 02:21 pm (UTC)
BEA YOU WRITE FAN FICS OMG!!!11111eleven uyyyyyyyy. *g*

i don't know the characters so ididn'treallygetitsorrynaplease, but the conversation was cute - i have a soft spot in my black little heart for 'dialogue' fics :) but do i detect a slightly bittersweet tone to it, yes? (told you, wala akong alam sa fandom na 'yan!)

Bakang Batugankyoy on July 14th, 2005 10:08 pm (UTC)
Whahahah, Mandee. XD Yep, I sort of write fics when I feel like it. This one's based on Tiff's original story, so it's not surprising that you don't know about it. :D Kahit na di mo sila kilala, I'm glad you liked it. Yes, there's a slightly bittersweet tone to it. Heheh. :D
drkmasterdarkmaestrox on July 14th, 2005 02:24 pm (UTC)
aw... ang cute ni astral!!!! 'appropriate'... hehe

kawaii!!!

a drabble? hm... it is a word that came from dribble, beacuse it sounds cute and they changed it to 'a' just for a little difference since both actually have something to do with the short/random manipulation of the hands...

sounds smart don't i?
frio69 on July 14th, 2005 02:37 pm (UTC)
SACLA!!! i've friended you! friend me back - pretty please? :)
Bakang Batugankyoy on July 14th, 2005 10:10 pm (UTC)
Whahah, Sacla. Natawa talaga kami nu Tiff sayo. Astral! Heheheh. At ;east nagustuhan mo, kahit di mo agad nagets. XD

And about your drabble story.... Ang corny moh! Forever ka na bang gagawa ng mga walang kwentang theories? Heheh.

Sounds smart but in your theory, you're not. XD
drkmasterdarkmaestrox on July 18th, 2005 11:06 am (UTC)
at last na get pa rin!

forever na iyan kyoy... wala na kayo magagawa... you're lucky to be able to hear the future's most promising laws! mwahahahahahahahahahahahaha

(sideline ko ang inventor after being a mastermind)